Draft:Chris Cheung (h0nh1m)

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Submission declined on 13 November 2024 by MarcGarver (talk). This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject. If you would like to continue working on the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window. If you have not resolved the issues listed above, your draft will be declined again and potentially deleted. If you need extra help, please ask us a question at the AfC Help Desk or get live help from experienced editors. Please do not remove reviewer comments or this notice until the submission is accepted. Where to get help If you need help editing or submitting your draft, please ask us a question at the AfC Help Desk or get live help from experienced editors. These venues are only for help with editing and the submission process, not to get reviews. If you need feedback on your draft, or if the review is taking a lot of time, you can try asking for help on the talk page of a relevant WikiProject. Some WikiProjects are more active than others so a speedy reply is not guaranteed. How to improve a draft Wikipedia:Contributing to Wikipedia – a basic overview on how to edit Wikipedia. Help:Wikitext – how to use the markup Help:Referencing for beginners – how to include references Wikipedia:Article development – how to develop your article Wikipedia:Writing better articles – how to improve your article Wikipedia:Verifiability – make sure your article includes reliable third-party sources You can also browse Wikipedia:Featured articles and Wikipedia:Good articles to find examples of Wikipedia's best writing on topics similar to your proposed article. Improving your odds of a speedy review To improve your odds of a faster review, tag your draft with relevant WikiProject tags using the button below. This will let reviewers know a new draft has been submitted in their area of interest. For instance, if you wrote about a female astronomer, you would want to add the Biography, Astronomy, and Women scientists tags. Add tags to your draft Editor resources Easy tools: Citation bot (help) | Advanced: Fix bare URLs Declined by MarcGarver 16 days ago. Last edited 0 seconds ago. Reviewer: Inform author. This draft has been resubmitted and is currently awaiting re-review.

• Comment: It is nearly there, but the tone is still less than neutral. For example, "With a deep interest in Eastern and Western philosophy, he blends traditions with cutting-edge technology to create immersive soundscape, fantastic generative graphics and critical data art" could have been lifted straight from his own website or PR material. It's not enough that one source said something like this, you need to look at the general tone and use more neutral language. MarcGarver (talk) 12:16, 13 November 2024 (UTC)

Chris Cheung Hon Him (Chinese: 張瀚謙; b. 1983), also known as h0nh1m, is a Hong Kong new media artist, director and curator.^[1] Cheung is best known for installation art and audiovisual performances.^[2] His installations and audiovisual performances incorporate electronic, sound, visual, and creative technologies.^[1][3]

In 2007, Cheung founded the immersive-tech team, XEX, which was renamed XCEPT in 2017. In 2013, he founded the new media art team, XCEED.^[3] Their works have been showcased worldwide and won internationally renowned awards including the Red Dot, HKTDC, Frame, A' Design, Golden Pin, GDC 11, DFA Design for Asia awards, Lumen Prize and New York Art Director Club Young Guns 11. Afterwards, he established the innovation lab XPLOR and created a media art platform FutureTense.^[1]